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Critiques

No More Performance Critiques

Thursday, July 26th, 2012

After four years of posting my nearly all of my videos and performance critiques online I’ve decided to no longer continue doing so. Here’s why:

  • There’s been little to no interaction between my visitors and I about the performance critiques. Given the lack of response after four years, posting the videos has become too time consuming to continue. When I started, I was on stage 3-4 times a week. Now it’s 15-20 times. That’s time I can spend on other comedy things.
  • Diminishing marginal returns. The more I do it, the less beneficial detailed analysis of each and every performance becomes. I still plan on watching all my videos and making notes where applicable just while on the go instead of only while at the computer.
  • Doing this consistently has made me overly results focused, and not enough process focused. While careful review improves comedy, it leads to me having less fun on stage as I start thinking about how to grade the performance while I’m up there, which leads to worse results on stage.
  • I want to start getting booked more, so I want fewer “less than stellar” videos around. I’ll still post some new videos on the site but less frequently.
  • I’m still gonna leave my critiques on my site, but I will no longer link to Performance Critiques from the front page.
  • Generally speaking, it seems few people want to watch a 7 to 20 minute stand up video on the internet that isn’t from a TV broadcast. And the people that do want to watch, don’t want to watch the same comedian day after day. Fans much more appreciate 30-60 seconds of something funny instead of a longer pieces.

Other thoughts:

  • I still highly recommend reviewing all your videos
  • I haven’t run into someone not booking me by having these videos online, but then again most of my bookings have been through people I already know, not cold calls. It’s possible (but not sure how likely) that someone was gonna book me but never contact me after watching the wrong critique.
  • My site will still be updated regularly, but with content that I think is more interesting to others: Book quotes from interesting books I read, clips of my sets and new jokes and interviews with comedians.

As one last video share, take a look at my first time on stage (July 1, 2008) compared to now June 30 (2012).

First time ever:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lGLx4Fyy6Fo

June 2012:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N9MIgM87OfQ

Performance Critique: June 30

Wednesday, July 25th, 2012

Closing out the 8pm show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N9MIgM87OfQ

3m28s There’s some sort of CT – Republican connection ad lib

Overall: Great set, in the moment and material hit.

Performance Critique: June 29

Wednesday, July 25th, 2012

The 8pm show, light crowd

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oJfoEAF2LeM

1m30s Say “shit is getting real” instead of “uncomfortable”

4m33s Try to get back into the material smoother

8m22s Good job pushing the crowd interaction

Overall: Material struggled but the crowd work went well and I did a lot more of it than I usually do.

Performance Critique: June 28d

Tuesday, July 24th, 2012

Late night music and comedy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=axgoQQaiKaI

1m58s Cut the “afraid not to” part

4m08s Cut that first one

Overall: Worked out a lot of new material, a lot of which I should rewrite or not do again.

Performance Critique: June 28c

Tuesday, July 24th, 2012

Closing a 9pm show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g3OZCa-VSE4

5m28s Don’t need the “cause I’m afraid not to” part

6m24s The crowd work to material needs to be smoother

Overall: Solid short set

Performance Critique: June 28b

Monday, July 23rd, 2012

An 830pm bar show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BuAdr46qYhI

0m35s Crowd work to material needs a smoother transition

2m45s If a couple isn’t married, it might be funny to ask “why not?”

Overall: Decent but shouldn’t have closed on that last joke.

Performance Critique: June 28a

Monday, July 23rd, 2012

A 7pm basement show for like ten people

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pbhP_EoTL9o

2m53s Could’ve focused more on this bit of info from the audience

3m42s Good job being in the moment to acknowledge it

4m31s Smoother delivery here

Overall: Ok not great. Could’ve pushed for more crowd work when I found out about the guy not signing a prenup the second time.

Performance Critique: June 27

Friday, July 20th, 2012

A 9pm show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iC5asluW1DA

5m51s I could cut the words “interesting side note”

Overall: Solid set

Performance Critique: June 26

Thursday, July 19th, 2012

Going last 2+ hours into a show

0m40s Have a joke response line for when I learn where they’re from

2m35s Do the wet dream line to a younger audience member before the czar line

8m12s Good job with the crowd work and continuing it for a while after they said something funny

9m40s Open eyes more

Overall: Mediocre material wise, good crowd work wise.

Performance Critique: June 24b

Thursday, July 19th, 2012

Opening a 4:30pm graduation show

0m31s At least try a “oh, we used to be neighbors” before going into the bit, or don’t ask the question

1m44s Tighten the commentary about the audience here

6m18s Hit that last line harder

Overall: Strong short set, too many questions of the audience for only 6 minutes though

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